Blog 1 Reflection

For my first blog, I think I did an okay job at introducing what my topic is and the general format that my blogs will take on. As my Lang-8 reviser pointed out, I had trouble wording "take care of the hotel," so in my revision, I just said that Jack was the winter custodian (冬管理人). As usual, my experience wth Lang-8 was a pleasant one. In the future, I will continue to try and incorporate new grammar points, since that's something that I think I was definitely missing this time around.