lang 8 3 reflection

In general, I think this was my best lang-8 post so far. I thought I chose a somewhat original topic, and I was able to incorporate some new grammar into it without feeling like I was forcing it in. I forgot on obvious use of ばかり, which was annoying to notice, but other than that, my main mistakes were from vocabulary errors. To remedy this, I think I just need to start using alc.co.jp and jisho.org more frequently in conjunction with each other. That said, my commenter noted some stylistic inconsistencies with からand ので that I think I need to be careful of. All in all, though, I think this post shows a marked improvement in my writing skills, and I'm quite happy with my results.