Lang-8 2 reflection

When writing this blog post, I didn't think it was my best effort. However, I only had one correction on Lang-8, which I guess means I did okay. I still think my flow leaves much to be desired, especially in this post. I seemed to awkwardly jump between movies and directors, without ever spending enough time on each one. I put more effort into trying to use newer grammar structures, and I think as a result, the overall quality of the post suffered. I think the biggest problem was that in order to really talk about The Oscars and have a flow that works, I would need the post to be excessively long. I think in future posts, I'll just stick to a single movie (or trailer) and talk about why it works.